Friday, 19 August 2016

Bike Racing





where
What happened
Top sentence
At Olympic race track
A bike race will start about three minutes.
Top attribute
While on the long road
There were no people around only the racers. The sun’s heat was boiling. I tried to pedal as fast as i can.
Middle attribute
Going down the road
The track became lower and lower. I need to decrease my speed by braking. I saw and heard people cheering at the side of the road.
Bottom attribute
Middle of the street
I can see the finish line ahead.

conclusion
At Finish line
I finished 1st at the race. I saw my supporters jumping cheerfully.


At Olympic race track, A bike race will start about three minutes. While on the long road, There were no people around only the racers. The sun’s heat was boiling. I tried to pedal as fast as i can. Going down the road, The track became lower and lower. I need to decrease my speed by braking. I saw and heard people cheering at the side of the road. Middle of the street, I can see the finish line ahead. At finish line, I finished 1st at the race. I saw my supporters jumping cheerfully.

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