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What happened
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Top sentence
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At Olympic race track
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A bike race will start about three minutes.
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Top attribute
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While on the long road
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There were no people around only the racers. The sun’s heat was boiling. I tried to pedal as fast as i can.
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Middle attribute
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Going down the road
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The track became lower and lower. I need to decrease my speed by braking. I saw and heard people cheering at the side of the road.
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Bottom attribute
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Middle of the street
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I can see the finish line ahead.
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conclusion
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At Finish line
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I finished 1st at the race. I saw my supporters jumping cheerfully.
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At Olympic race track, A bike race will start about three minutes. While on the long road, There were no people around only the racers. The sun’s heat was boiling. I tried to pedal as fast as i can. Going down the road, The track became lower and lower. I need to decrease my speed by braking. I saw and heard people cheering at the side of the road. Middle of the street, I can see the finish line ahead. At finish line, I finished 1st at the race. I saw my supporters jumping cheerfully.
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